THE JOURNEY

This is the final cut of our film opening The Journey

Changes since the last rough cut:

the audio has been levelled, and more ambient sound has been added
The idents were also added

• Sound:
• different cars driving by sound effect
• using the volume levels to keep it even
• foley sound of panting
• camera whir sound removed
• dog barking sound added more successfully 
• dialogue at the end matches with the visuals, and the "good afternoon" was cut for verisimilitude
• music in the car volume has been fixed
• dialogue audio is quieter now
• the phone ringing is also quieter and less jarring now
• audio fade at end
• Titles:
• there was a wonky title at the start, that has now been fixed
• the film title has been put after the car crash before the light flare - look better. Also made longer so looks less like an inter-title
• Editing:
• more match cuts in the first cross-cut scene, this adds more meaning to the scene, showing the connection between the 2 characters
• trims were made so that it is closer to the 2 minute mark
• reactions to the news he will not play tennis again are shown

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